Quiet Dream Poem by Liza Sud

Quiet Dream

Rating: 4.1


You irritate me immensely!
I dreamed that I came to you.
You sometimes wanted to rape me,
I was tired and longed for food.

But you suddenly became nervous,
And you almost started to cry.
Then you said that you better had daughters
Than a big amount of wives.

Saturday, September 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is the translation of a poem written by Russian poet Alexey Suslov.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 01 October 2015

This certainly has that curious mix if sense and nonsense that dreams often embody. Is there some cosmic Dream Maker laughing at his ingenuity in making our dreaming so crazy. Or are they impartial messages from the psyche. This one really puzzles me. It will take a dream reader like Joseph or Daniel to find its core meaning. And not this Daniel. The one in the Old Testament.

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Fabrizio Frosini 29 February 2016

'a big amount of wives'.. mm.. men dreams a lot about such a chance.. ;) Indeed, a good deal of those men who live in polygamous societies, where they exert their male-power onto women.. are satisfied with such a living.. since they have also the right to abjure those wifes they don't want anymore.. and 'marry' very young girls.. sometimes kids not even teens..! They think to be 'men', but are only 'males'.. And what about those crazy assassins who blow themselves up, believing they will receive the ''gift'' of 30 virgins when in 'paradise'? They are 'failures' twice.. failed both as men and as human beings..

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 February 2016

Glad to have your poem as poem of the day! Mine was on the 8th of this month. Dreams reflect direct at times in life. Nice work.

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Mannah Shekh 08 October 2015

Deep meaning poem.. I'm salute the poets soul..Thanks dear poet

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Rahman Henry 13 October 2015

Lovely poem. Nicely penned. I like it so much.

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A B Faniki 06 September 2019

Well crafted my dear poet. I love it, it is simple and vivid. Thanks 4 sharing such beautiful poem

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 August 2019

very intellectual poem/// thanks for sharing it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 July 2019

An insightful inscription has been made incisively on dream touching to. Thanks for translating the poem so nicely.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 February 2019

many women have exhibited a great desire to be raped at least in deams I can't say why but they all confide in me PL DOREAD my bestest poem MOMS SMILES THANKZ

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Dev Anand 19 August 2017

such an insightful poem. went on thinking to understand u really... thankyou liza

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