Quagmire Poem by Sathya Narayana

Quagmire

Rating: 5.0


Mind rumpus; thoughts viscous; words pause
Vicious vagueness vituperates
Poesy prowls; never in poise!
Demurs to egress with prowess

Ticklish process it is, to pick
One thick globule of slick morass
That abounds our social precincts
It’s like opt’ng the best of the worst

Then ensues my usual address
Showcasing to the world, this slush
What a curse it’s to our progress
In abstruse poetic phrases

Read they, some with seriousness
Some with a snigger, unimpressed
All to forget in few minutes
Thus my dénouement rests and rusts.

Before I come to my senses
Slips back the dirt into its source
With a last laugh at my amiss
With stolid stares, I remain stoic

This story doesn’t end here, friends
Again I stick my seeking hands
Into the surrounding quagmire
This time for fistfuls, with vengeance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 07 April 2009

When you get up to your elbows in quagmire? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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rago rago 07 April 2009

why such vengeance in the poem? ...... beautiful right and meaningfully penned.....be careful......

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rago rago 07 April 2009

why such vengeance in the poem? ...... beautiful right and meaningfully penned.....be careful......

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Indira Babbellapati 08 April 2009

u sound an angry poet, every inch...chill!

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Ben Gieske 19 May 2009

Great combination of so many words beginning with the same consonant. They provide a lot of punch and food for the ears adding extras to their meaning. The s words are especially effective. They also remind me of the previous poem about snakes.

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Kranthi Pothineni 04 May 2009

'QUAGMIRE' a nice thought and also composed well. Nice one.

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Vaibhav Pandey 18 April 2009

Thats why you are my fav poet sir.....great great poem....you rock sir....goes to my fav....10

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Barry A. Lanier 12 April 2009

our poetry is our survival, , , , a vehicle of catharsis at a minimum....and even more for others....pain shared is diminished

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Sandra Martyres 09 April 2009

You have certainly given vent to your anger in this poem....I agree with Indira..you need to chill out...

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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