Pure Waters Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

Pure Waters

Rating: 5.0


The river does shine in the valley of sunlight
As it flows gently around rock and stone,
Its sound is like music from heaven that's playing
It roams and it wanders as I watch alone.
Pure waters so clear breathing life to the landscape
So cool and refreshing on this summer's day,
Giving me strength to walk on in the distance
Viewing its wonder I follow its way.

The hillsides surrounding the valley of sunlight
So green and so pretty that now lies before,
They tower above me and I feel so lucky
To witness the sight of this vision once more.
Pure waters so clear breathing life to the landscape
So cool and refreshing on this summer's day,
Giving me strength to walk on in the distance
Viwing its wonder I follow its way.

The skies up above in the valley of sunlight
Blue as a sapphire and still is the air,
A picture of peace in this place of such beauty
Leading me forth to the joys it does share.
Pure waters so clear breathing life to the landscape
So cool and refreshing on this summer's day,
Giving me strength to walk on in the distance
Viewing its wonder I follow its way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C.R. Clark 21 January 2009

Beauiful write, Andrew. I really like the refrain: . Pure waters so clear breathing life to the landscape So cool and refreshing on this summer's day, Giving me strength to walk on in the distance Viewing its wonder I follow its way. This is melodious indeed, my friend...10++ Richard

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 January 2009

A poem as pure as water and flowing like the river. Beautiful write, Andrew. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Andrew, I wish in South Australia we had pure water so clear breathing life to the landscape. We are in drought here and our River Torrens is dried up in so many places. And how you appreciate beauty and your recording of it is limitless. As Alison says it is almost a song with the repeats of lines in each verse, and this only makes it more memorable with the repetition. Once again, its just beautiful.....Karin Anderson

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Lynda Robson 22 January 2009

Vivid and beautiful, flowing like the pure waters you describe so well, thanks Andrew,10 Lynda xxxx

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Bonnie Collins 22 January 2009

Beautifull write.. Filled with so much beauty, and vividly expressed... We dont need Robert Frost, we have Andrew Blakemore.... Very good my friend.. Bonnie

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Tsira Goge 22 January 2009

They tower above me and I feel so lucky To witness the sight of this vision once more... .............................................................. You have a high and noble soul... Which cannot what easy look beauty of the nature.Remarkable - this poems , Andrew... 10..... / thank you for your kind covmments.../ Best wishes, Tsira

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