~ Psychosomatic Lingerie ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
~ Psychosomatic Lingerie ~
From: Sadiqullah Khan
To: Nivedita Bagchi
Date-Time: 12/23/2009 4: 47: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: A Nobel Prize
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See my poem, A Nobel Prize. I have included ur poem there. Is it ok?
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To Poet Sadiqullah Khan:
By love you’ve embosomed my poem…
On the eve of New Year Poet niv
‘Crowning’ your poetic affections
Regards for the honor,
In Ever Poetic Tieship.
niv
31 December,2009.
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Sadiqullah Khan (12/23/2009 4: 30: 00 AM)
A Nobel Prize
I
As on today
24 Dec,2500 BC
Being the head
Of the committee
Where a beautiful poem
PSYCHOSOMATIC LIGERIE
By MS. NIVEDETA BAGCHI SPC.UK.
Has been submitted
For review
And I hereby
Bestow upon her
And she is
Very kind
To accept
A NOBEL PRIZE
For the reasons
That she has written
Pure and sensible
Human emotions
And feelings
Applause
Congrats
........
24/12/2009
~ PSYCHOSOMATIC LINGERIE ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
24 December,2009.
Its scare
And rare
To get
Privacy
Intimacy.
Don’t care
I do dare
To bare
Psychosomatic
Lingerie
In poetry
Else are
Scary
Parry
Fury
Lurid hungry.
Ms. Nivedita
A wee lory
The Poetry
Her emotional
Sanctuary.
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Sent to Noble Prize conferring committee:
[In Best Poem category for the year 2500 BC ~ niv ~ LOL! ! ]
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To Poet S. Khan, Thanks for your honor to me…and I’ve read your poem ‘A Nobel Prize’ where you’ve clubbed this poem …a big poetic heart …hats off to you Sir. Ms. Nivedita UK
gives new style in composing and contemplation.especially in the second paragraph the words are arrayed fastidiously..nice
Bold and precise. A wonderful interaction of two poets. Well done, lovely! A crown for both! ; D
neat-precise-hits the nails where it hurts and words make all the sound defintely 10++++++
As usual a bold poetry To bare/Psychosomatic/Lingerie/In poetry/Else are Scary/Parry /Fury…’ sarcastically rhymed ‘The Poetry /Her emotional /Sanctuary. ‘…and so indeed for a committed and confirmed poet. 10++ Dr. V.
‘I do dare/To bare/Psychosomatic/Lingerie/In poetry’ Thumbs up to your poetic venture… Tried to stay nude and truthful to your emotion … No concoction pretension and reservation…that’s the spirit As reader I whole heartedly support it. Nice reading experience. 10+
‘…Ms. Nivedita/A wee lorry/The Poetry /Her emotional /Sanctuary.’ Yeah you’re Lory [Australasian parrots having a brush-tipped tongue for feeding on nectar]… But origin is India…the country of oldest wisdom and ageless culture Reflected in her refuse in Poetry-Sanctuary the most coveted place To be feed on nectar the aesthetic fluid for every poet.9 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 6:39:50 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Subtly Poet Niv tried to convey that in symbolically-hypothetical-2500-BC’ life was not so much under the lens of.Paparazzo’s, spy cams…scoops…media…and so on. Modernity has pirated our ‘intimate-ultimate-sublimate-innate’ Privacy we no more can laugh LOUDLY …open our heart fully lest we’ll be exposed, laughed, cut a sorry figure or my weakness will be surfaced and time pressure! All are ‘measured-programmed’… we’re plastered psychosomatically by the red eyes of petticoat of etiquette and foolish mannerism and clichéd modernism etc. Create unnecessary aura arrogance grandiose around us…’See how important I’m’ [factually I’m unimportant LOL! ]. Thank you Poet for your insight. dr.sakti