Jahan zaib

Rookie - 94 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Proverbial Love - Poem by Jahan zaib

She said, ‘be perfect If you want to be my man.’
But they say, I said, No one is perfect.
Then she said, ‘you haven’t heard from any man
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Comments about Proverbial Love by Jahan zaib

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (6/12/2013 4:44:00 PM)

    a poem that was really smart, the comparison is right on target bring us to think deeper
    its words so simple but full of meaning
    really really good poem
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (6/4/2013 11:55:00 PM)

    yes, love be gets love....the diction and point of view is not usual...spice is normal... love it...carry on (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (5/26/2013 11:40:00 AM)

    The one who sees beauty in real and in virtual is the perfect man........ Again a brilliant and beautiful piece by a brilliant poet ......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/26/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    ha hah Every one wants to see his/her beloved/loved above all...a contrastive realities, one side we say practice makes a man perfect, on the other side we heard no one is perfect in this world...well truth (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (5/24/2013 12:17:00 PM)

    As human we always imperfect, so being imperfect is a perfection for a human_Soul (Report) Reply








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