Pronunciation 1 Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Pronunciation 1

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Va conduc la aeroport
Ne vedem vineri
Nu este nimic rau in asta
Depinde de imprejurari

Amid the men of Okinawa I saw you
Your soft voice soaring across the Universe
With innocent children touching grace
To a violin's loud soothing melody

Vintul bate dinspre nord-vest
In cit timp ajung acolo?
As vrea sa vad ce tablouri au
Este din canza parazitilor atmosferici

(dedicated to a poet friend at poemhunter, Marieta Maglas)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 05 October 2009

Your poem conveys pleasing sounds and creates a beautiful picture.

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Lynn Glover 05 October 2009

I, like Salley, Do not understand the language in 1 and 2 verses. the middle verse is melodious. Thanks and God bless, Lynn

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Catrina Heart 05 October 2009

In different languages...well written poem loved it dear...nice dedication to a great poetess here at PH!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 05 October 2009

wow! You must be a linguistic sir!

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Obinna Eruchie 05 October 2009

You are truly inspired by Marieta Maglas in this one that you paid such a special tribute to her. Interesting.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 19 October 2009

a good tribute to Marieta! I don't understand Romanian but I liked the English verses! a nice Imagery. innocent children/ soothing melody.... very nice

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Juan Carlos Abeti 06 October 2009

it seems a very nice one, but i do not understand the other lenguage

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Ravi A 06 October 2009

The symbolism is beyond my scope. Overall a nice one. Marieta is a good hearted lady.

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The Lost.. 06 October 2009

nice poem......................

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Luwi Habte 06 October 2009

nice tribute to a great poet luwi

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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