Promise And Faith Poem by Khairul Ahsan
Promise And Faith
When you say something,
I believe it without any doubt.
When you promise me something,
If it gets fulfilled or not,
I do not worry about.
I wait and I wait in good faith, yet
When I see your promise not kept,
I do still wait,
With the hope that it would be met,
Someday, to come yet.
Every new day as it comes,
I look for your response as promised.
Not finding it,
I do not despair, but choose to wait
For another morning, another day,
And not allow my faith to sway.
Dhaka,20 January 2014
Words we cannot keep shouldn't be spoken.
I like the serene simplicity of this poem and the rhythms of the repetitions. This conveys the sense of time, simply waiting and hoping. Your poem suggests you have patience and trust - which are not easy qualities to cultivate! I hope your faith will be rewarded with the promise kept.
what matters more than the promise is our faith...very cogently expressed.
promise is the existence of love and faith so far its long to prove or stand.... nicely written...
It's all about faith in life no matter how easy or hard it is and to keep it a lifetime. To forever cherish it and count one's blessings. A beautifully well written poem that calls to one's inner heart and soul. May God Bless and Keep you and I thank you sir for writing and sharing your inspiring and reflective poem with its heartfelt and captivating message. A joy to read from beginning to end. Five worthy stars. Take care and I wish you well.
This poem I believe is the definition of hope and faith. I enjoyed reading it.
A nice and inspiring write, full of faith and hope. Thanks for this beautiful write.
Thank you, Seema Chowdhury, for your kind words of appreciation. I am much inspired.
@Beauteous Victory Thanks for the appreciation. You never cease to inspire me. Much obliged!
@Musfiq Us Shaleheen, Thanks a lot for reading my poem and leaving your thoughtful comment there.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I like the serene simplicity of this poem and the rhythms of the repetitions. This conveys the sense of simply waiting and hoping for the promise to be met. Your poem suggests you have patience and trust - which are not easy qualities to cultivate! I hope your faith will be rewarded with the promise kept.