Promise Poem by Vishal Sharma

Promise

Rating: 4.0


Since we know
each other
our souls
may vary
our roads
may diversed
but know one thing
i will always
love you as usual
because for me
you are not an
object.
for me you are
what i cant express
thus you too should
feel what i feel
it will heel
all my pain
thus i will gain
your love
even if God calls
me back above.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sj Holland 04 June 2013

My fav passage: ....i will always love you as usual.... So bland yet exciting, so boring yet exhilirating. A great statement about something that is such a part of life that there is no question that it will always exist. Very nice, easy to read verse.

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Hazel Durham 02 June 2013

Beautiful, full of charm, and great spirit!

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2013

Smooth and lovely..your talent is diverging now_Soul

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