Process Of Thoughts From Micro To Macro Poem by ritty patnaik

Process Of Thoughts From Micro To Macro

Rating: 5.0


pebble
stone
rock
boulder
hills
mountains

cloud
droplet
drizzle
shower
downpour
storm

cocoon
catterpillar
butterfly
moth
buds
seeds
weeds
flower
garden.

sapling
leaves
trees
flowers
fruits
orchard

colours
hues
shades
paints
brushes
canvas
contrast
complementary
canvas
painting

red
blue
green
yellow
indigo
purple
orange
rainbow

letter
word
sentense
paragraph
book
dictionary
poet
writer

moods
wishes
longings
wants
needs
greed
dissatisfaction

tired
eyes
daydreams
yawns
sleeps
retrospects
introspects
slumbers

infatuations
love
happiness
happens
suddenly
shining
stars
warmth
overflows
bonding
binding.

ego
averice
jealousy
meanness
attitude
hatred
downfall
divide.

round
zero
whole
circle
moon
disc

epicentre
nimbus
nucleus
form
formless
macro
pacro
cociousness
cosmos

man
being
spect
particle
fraction
dot
spot
microcosm

he gives
takes.
conscience
decides
right
wrong
he adds
he subtracts
actions
karmas
equals to
destiny.

moment
fax
mind
thoughts
waves
ascend
transcend
mingle
merge
meditation
oblivion
restoration
progression
emancipation
liberation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 25 August 2009

An excellent journey from micro to macro, covering so many aspects from physical to subtle, from finite to infinite, from bondage to liberation, very beautifully penned and that with extreme care and with insight, thanks for sharing, it was a worthy journey!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 August 2009

excellent! ....micro to macro......new taste....every words captured a lot! Once i thought to write a poem as human thought process! I mean, actually our thinking not according to grammar's rule! when we express we carefully pen them. In the postmodern criticism, there is a place to pen lawless facts which come in mind! 10+

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Raj Nandy 16 August 2009

The micro to macro thoughts, follow a logical pattern also! Yes, greed always leads to dissaisfaction! The world has enough for man's need, but not enough for his greed! While meditation and contemplation leads to his satisfaction and liberation! 10! -Raj

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