Problem Poem by bubble rao

Problem

Rating: 4.8


I am the one who is sick of your expectations.
I am the one who is frustrated with Life, the World, Everything.
I am the one who wants to get out.
I am the one stuck by responsibility
I am the one who hides in a shell.
I am the one who tries to escape reality with words.
I am the one angry with myself for not trying hard enough.
I am the one who hides behind a smile.
I am the one watching the signs of her world falling down, again.
I am the one who is used to it all, enough not to care.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Toni Rumbel 07 June 2011

I want you to know that you're not alone. I often feel this way, like people expect too much from me. They're just angry that they can't be as good as you actually are so they have to find some sort of fault in you so that they can keep criticising you. Don't let people like that pull you down though. They're just jealous and all you can do is try your best and if your best isn't good enough, that's ok. At least you tried.

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Swimming in the sea of sadness but excellently expressed. Keep writing.

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your words come out very creatively through your pain, in more than one way i can relate to this, let us continue to write, great poem bubble rao :)

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