survi sharma

Prize Rings - Poem by survi sharma

I knew our end was near
the day we shopped for rings
I thought we were forever dear
but you were not meant to be
my king

that is a day of every girls
but, for me it was a cruel
I learnt the hard way all is not
as it seems
and my life is my own for the

the focus of my attention has
since shifted
and its crazy how closed off I
and now my spirit a new has been
I can't wait never to hear you
say my name

from the moment I looked into
his eyes
the inner depth of my heart
began to sing
so I thank you for all your hate and lies
because they paved my way to
a prize ring!

Comments about Prize Rings by survi sharma

  • Rookie Nikhil Sharma (9/11/2013 8:02:00 AM)

    Thats a very natural one, you can be a very good writer...keep it up..and happy to meet you here (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 40 Points Kinjal Sharma (8/8/2013 3:22:00 AM)

    what a romantic poem
    loved it to the core of my heart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ankit Sharma (8/3/2013 12:26:00 PM)

    enchanting music of the soul and a great write (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 811 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/29/2013 10:50:00 AM)

    Good poem of positive energy. For every action has its equal and opposite Positively faing challenges is a good quality. Tense situation easily overcomes.Good content and form. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jenie~ (7/26/2013 3:14:00 AM)

    a ring in the prize and a heart winning saga delivered
    written so well and a great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (7/25/2013 1:09:00 PM)

    heart winning a rare reading masterpiece written once in a huge space of time
    great reading experience and a heart charming poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,821 Points Ramesh Rai (7/24/2013 9:40:00 AM)

    you have revealed ur poetic talent only with few poems. maturity over thoughts knocking. poetry is exclusive when u can determine some better. age factor is also keep it up.future is bright.take care of ur study. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,961 Points Valsa George (7/23/2013 6:57:00 AM)

    As dark clouds shift away, prize rings come our way! Rhyming and sweet! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Ankur Thakur (7/20/2013 6:21:00 AM)

    Nice one!
    Are the happenings narrated in this poem true? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (7/19/2013 9:51:00 PM)

    memories will return time after time. but we must look to the future. a good read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,722 Points Hazel Durham (7/18/2013 4:05:00 AM)

    Beautiful with great rhythm and flow, we can always move onto better horizons! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,089 Points Is It Poetry (7/17/2013 7:12:00 PM)

    how have you survived
    the speaking of such
    a lovely name....iip (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,863 Points David Wood (7/17/2013 1:31:00 PM)

    This is an excellent poem with good rhyming and rythem. I like it very much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,269 Points Vishal Sharma (7/17/2013 3:17:00 AM)

    great one, the nostalgic feeling created is superb
    plz write more and more (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (7/17/2013 2:51:00 AM)

    Excellent poem, delivered well, adamantly clear. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 17, 2013

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