Treasure Island

survi sharma


Prize rings


I knew our end was near
the day we shopped for rings
I thought we were forever dear
but you were not meant to be
my king

that is a day of every girls
dreams
but, for me it was a cruel
awakening,
I learnt the hard way all is not
as it seems
and my life is my own for the
taking

the focus of my attention has
since shifted
and its crazy how closed off I
became
and now my spirit a new has been
uplifted
I can't wait never to hear you
say my name

from the moment I looked into
his eyes
the inner depth of my heart
began to sing
so I thank you for all your hate and lies
because they paved my way to
a prize ring!

Submitted: Wednesday, July 17, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, July 17, 2013

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  • Nikhil Sharma (9/11/2013 8:02:00 AM)

    Thats a very natural one, you can be a very good writer...keep it up..and happy to meet you here (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/29/2013 10:50:00 AM)

    Good poem of positive energy. For every action has its equal and opposite reaction.no? Positively faing challenges is a good quality. Tense situation easily overcomes.Good content and form. (Report) Reply

  • ~ Jenie~ (7/26/2013 3:14:00 AM)

    a ring in the prize and a heart winning saga delivered
    written so well and a great poem (Report) Reply

  • Anamika Jalan (7/25/2013 1:09:00 PM)

    heart winning a rare reading masterpiece written once in a huge space of time
    great reading experience and a heart charming poem (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/24/2013 9:40:00 AM)

    you have revealed ur poetic talent only with few poems. maturity over thoughts knocking. poetry is exclusive when u can determine some better. age factor is also here.so keep it up.future is bright.take care of ur study. (Report) Reply

  • Is It Poetry (7/17/2013 7:12:00 PM)

    Survi-Survi-Survi
    how have you survived
    withoutwithout
    the speaking of such
    a lovely name....iip (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (7/17/2013 1:31:00 PM)

    This is an excellent poem with good rhyming and rythem. I like it very much. (Report) Reply

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