Prize Poem Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

I have read three poems so far and all of wich i believe show that you need improvement in English grammer, if you were to improve i believe that you would be able to write much better. Also a word of advice. poetry does not have to have rhyming but it does when the words fit(They will give of a feeling to you, and you will know that no other word is better than the one you chose) , rhyming words in place of a better word kills the poem. As for the review of this poem. I do not feel as if you enjoyd writing this poem and as a result, i do not enjoy reading it much eithor. again i wait for your improvement. I believe that you have talent and that you can write much better poetry. Also i would enjoy it if you wrote a poem in a different style other than the 3 i have seen. Thank you.

Know your style, stick to it, improve where necessary, enjoy and... keep on keeping on!

awesome poem. share more :)

Woow, it that's very good..

Congratulations its amazing...keep up the spirit

a lovely prize poem. nice write

I'm hoping that your lovely prize poem will win for you the prize.

wow nicely written, very beautiful

perfect and beautiful. also the title is obviously nice!

hate it when people go on about rhyming and why we shouldn't do it, some people like to rhyme others do not, it's not right to push your individual style on other aspiring poets. If it's good enough for dylan and emily d rhyming is good enough for me lol