Khairul Ahsan

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Pristine Love - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

No love is as overwhelming and as pristine,
As the maiden love of a lass, say of sixteen.
When, like closed petals of a bud she begins to unfold
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Topic(s) of this poem: love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Dedicated to all the young lovers, in whose pristine minds love reigns supreme!

Dhaka
26 July 2013
Copyright Reserved.

Comments about Pristine Love by Khairul Ahsan

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/21/2016 4:14:00 AM)

    The journey of love! With faith and hope. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Alem Hailu G/kristos Alem Hailu G/kristos (12/25/2015 6:59:00 AM)

    It is savoury and true.It depicts a genuine love many wish to get.I like both the music, architecture and the beef.TFS (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (12/25/2015 9:22:00 AM)

    Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your thoughtful appreciation there. Much obliged.

  • Shahin Latif Shahin Latif (11/29/2015 1:34:00 PM)

    Excellent Ink! I motivated this poem. Thank you so much Khairul Ahsan. Be well always. (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (12/25/2015 10:26:00 AM)

    Thank you very much, Shahin Latif, for reading my poem and leaving an appreciative comment here. Much obliged.

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (11/1/2015 12:02:00 PM)

    @Seema Chowdhury,
    In not too many words, you have praised my poem quite adequately. My sincere thanks for that.
    Hope to have your comments on some other pieces as well! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (11/1/2015 11:47:00 AM)

    @Maria Sharon Moemise,
    I can't thank you enough for your cogent appraisal of my poem. The rhyme, tempo and the sentiment expressed in the poem has been well appreciated.
    'Your writing just keeps one wanting to continue reading, even when the poem is at its end' - what a wonderful compliment!
    Thank you Maria! (Report) Reply

  • Maria Sharon Moemise Maria Sharon Moemise (11/1/2015 10:08:00 AM)

    I love how you find it so easy to get your rhyme and tempo in your poetry just right. The sentiment expressed in this poem reminds me a bit of me, back in the day and even now. This poem is indeed a true dedication to lovers young and old. Your writing just keeps one wanting to continue reading, even when the poem is at its end. Great write! ! 👍👍👍 (Report) Reply

  • Seema Chowdhury (10/20/2015 8:51:00 PM)

    Lovely expression and a tender write. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (10/20/2015 2:03:00 PM)

    @Melvina Germain,
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your thoughtful comment here. I am much inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (10/20/2015 8:04:00 AM)

    @Lucifera Santez,
    I am so glad to receive a comment from you after a long spell. Your words on my poem are very warm and generous. I appreciate.
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (10/20/2015 7:40:00 AM)

    @Rakhi Jayashankar,
    Thanks for reading my poem and leaving a comment here. It's wonderful to know that your maiden love was successfully converted into your life partner. It must have been a happy journey all through.
    Thanks for appreciating my humble work. (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain Melvina Germain (10/20/2015 5:28:00 AM)

    Soulmates such as this live a beautiful and trusting life for many, many years...Great insight into the life of an innocent. (Report) Reply

  • Lucifera Santez Lucifera Santez (10/13/2015 5:55:00 AM)

    wow.
    it has been quite a time and even after all this time, your poems greet me like an old friend.
    the concept of this poem is something i can understand and easily relate to.
    Such poignant expressions you have used.
    my first love was the fool you've mentioned.
    lovely work.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rakhi Jayashankar (4/4/2015 11:19:00 AM)

    my maiden love at sixteen is my life partner hence I. could relate to your verses wowww what a poem (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (3/1/2015 10:10:00 AM)

    @Cassandra Jasmine
    Thanks for rereading my old poems and complimenting again so generously. Am much inspired.
    ''If more people don't know you, I have no idea whatsoever, just what you have been doing! Or for that matter, what the people around us have been doing.' - I too am clueless! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (2/28/2015 11:04:00 PM)

    @Michelle Claus
    My apologies for this belated acknowledgement of your nice comments you left on my poem after reading it. I am so glad that you could relate this poem to your own life.
    how love permeates over time and requires more labor and commitment than hopes and dreams. But it was important to be that girl 25 years ago and imagine a soul mate. - I appreciate your thoughts, and agree with you. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (2/26/2015 12:45:00 PM)

    @Amitava Sur,
    I am so glad that my poem has conveyed to you the essence of my poem - the purity of first love, which I have called 'pristine love' here. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (2/26/2015 12:29:00 PM)

    @Jeannette Heywood,
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts on it. The feelings of first love remain permanently etched in our hearts. (Report) Reply

  • Cassandra Jasmine Cassandra Jasmine (2/25/2015 9:04:00 PM)

    After all these months, I've reread 'Pristine Love'. For some unfathomable reason, I am finding myself loving it even more.
    I can't say why. I can't say what makes it so beautiful. I can't say what my favorite part of it this particular writing is, but I can say that it's magic. It's that morning sunrise above a pond, it's the dewdrops dusting the early morning, it's that one smile that comes from a special sunrise.
    We see sunrises everywhere.
    We see stupid little ponds and fake smiles everywhere.
    But at a given particular moment, if you're just lucky enough to witness it, that spark of something, just something... you'll know it. We'll know it. You will know if that certain something is there or just down the drain. It's... intangible, if I must say.
    All this is probably a blub of incoherence. I'm spewing everything at a mere whim.
    And Softly Silence Speaks? To A Young Poet? Priceless. Just priceless. I know I am speaking to an elder, but I can't hold myself. For this, I apologize in advance.
    If more people don't know you, I have no idea whatsoever, just what you have been doing! Or for that matter, what the people around us have been doing.
    I must be off before my father comes to reprimand me. (Report) Reply

  • Jeannette Heywood Jeannette Heywood (11/10/2014 3:20:00 AM)

    Simply lovely. Expresses delicately the feelings of first love. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (7/7/2014 3:40:00 AM)

    @Kirti Sharma,
    Thanks for reading one of my oldest poems here and all your generous comments that you've left on my poem.
    I am deeply touched and inspired by your thoughtful comments and appreciation. (Report) Reply










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