Prisoner Of Your Love Poem by louis rams
Prisoner Of Your Love
i was a captive of your heart
a prisoner of your love.
like a prisoner i was whipped and beat
tied to your love, hands and feet.
i found myself tied and gagged
and i could not speak
for my voice was much to weak.
so i gave in to all that you would do.
because i was so much in love with you.
you took my love and like a doctor
dissected my heart, separated it
and pulled it apart.
you wanted to see all its functions
and how it would relate to you
and if i would leave you
lonely, sad and blue.
once you saw that my heart was true
and that there was nothing inside
that would want to hurt you.
you accepted my love and untied my chains
for you had so much to gain.
you gave into me as the day
gives in to the night.
so i took your heart and
we soared into flight
our hearts was on the wings of a dove
showing the world how true our love.
Heh! ! heh! ! This is good. I wish I some one will entrap me in some dungeon filled with love lolss.. Loved this one.. written with lots of emotions..10++ regards Shan
Your poem speaks of trust. You have written out details of reality within a relationship. Trust and the truth come forward and express themselves. Nice organization of thoughts and feelings to create this piece. Well done. DC
How lucky you were to be captured by the right person.She turned out to be your liberator. A deep and delving look at love.
You kind of know from this, that it is where true love can start. If you know that they will hang in there with you through the rough times, there's no place else to go but up. If they stick around through the worst then their really going to love the best. COOL 10++
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I would like to translate this poem
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Great flows of loving verse my friend...you express your love to the highest quality...a beautifully expressed heart of loving ways, and sways