The princess of the darkness is ready to marry,
Everyone in the dark world is very happy.
She pointed her teeth and set out to meet.
Lots of dark princes came to see her,
Wearing clothes of leather and silk and fur.
But the princess of the dark liked them none;
None but a very elegant one.
She accepted his proposal and promised to marry him.
But the people of dark world didn’t like it very much.
He was not a prince of dark as such;
His inside was bright,
Mind was filled with light,
His face glowed,
Everyone that saw him bowed,
He had a sight of glory,
Walk of floury.
His head held high,
All the girls look at him and sigh.
He was truly a prince, but not of darkness
But the prince of light;
The son of the sun.
He bowed to the princess of darkness.
The princess of darkness blinked her eyes
“You are a prince, but not of darkness” she said
The princess of darkness walked towards the prince of light
Took him to her room and bit his neck
“Now you are my prince, the prince of darkness
Together we shall rule this world of darkness”
Idea and theme are very good. But its very narrative just like a prose and essay.try to be more poetic.
As I said before you have the potential to be a great poet and now I see that you can also write stories with a great imagination.Nice idea about the battle between Good ad Evil but in my experience they are both equal.On the line Walk of floury did you mean flowery?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I really like the flow of this poem and I think if I am not wrong that this poem is about vampires or something. Still it was nice reading it as it is creative writing with a good command on the language.