Princess 2 Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Princess 2



Life is peaceful when,
Love warms the heart;
Oh Princess!
Living in the Castle of beautiful roses.

Sunday, January 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: princess
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 31 January 2016

Your opening statement is lush, romantic, irresistable, which is probably why so many women reject it. That in no way diminishes your sincerity. It highlights rather the abuse of beautiful language by people with ulterior motives. The result is that many poets do not write love poems - What a loss! I also love the last line - THE CASTLE OF BEAUTIFUL ROSES is like something out of a Medieval Allegory. I love it.

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