*primal Desire Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

*primal Desire

Rating: 3.0


Comb of
My finger
In your hair

Length long
In braids
Color bands

Breath against
My chest
Lick my sweat

Unwashed skin
My glands
In your love

Secretions in
And out
Extensions long

Wild beast
Frail love
Hungry moans

In your mouth
My fingers
Wet skins

Oozes from
My head
Virgins aroma

On my corpse
With feet soft
Live again

Bend and sway
A magic that
Eating stone

Like a scorpion
In heat
On my legs

Primal desire
What is soul
What is love
10/2/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 10 February 2009

OOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH! ! somebody is in the mood................HOT! !

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 February 2009

Primal Indeed Sadiqullah, great work...10

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now tats some passion.. this piece is on fire

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sumaira .....ir 10 February 2009

an exploration of one's inner hot emotions.... 10/10

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Anjali Sinha 10 February 2009

hottttttttt and oooooooooozing primal desire ++++++10 anjali

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Reshma Ramesh 10 February 2009

sliding fingers in my hair gripped and let go your eyes on my shoulders lower down to feast on the roundness tips that taste searching hurry around slow down, fast they go fingertips traces my lines hard and soft out my love secrets sharp lines on my back sway and sway till you pin me down in my mouth your whole moan and groan fireworks in the sky fiercely beautiful tender vaguely animal breathed have you life into me my skin crimson alive like a lioness in heat fiery flame, combustion primal desire this is love this is soul

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Joseph Poewhit 10 February 2009

Touches on the RAW for sure.

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