Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 185 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

Priceless Money But Intension - Poem by Vishal Sharma

have you ever thought your existance
when you are penniless and without ideas
do you think the charming luck will bless on you?
when hands are empty rather bore the world is
and the price of price is felt at that juncture
when we are bare and nobody supports us
do you think yourself to be in that situation
and have ever thought bout the plight condition
yes, i have done so not today but everyday
before the almighty, before the landlords
who drench away my penny from me wow
but remember they are unable to drench my destiny
this gives the heat to the fire of my intension.


Comments about Priceless Money But Intension by Vishal Sharma

  • Rookie ~ Jenie~ (6/10/2013 1:21:00 AM)

    u r amazing
    great poem vishal (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,018 Points Ramesh Rai (6/6/2013 11:06:00 AM)

    sorry for delay. such a grt write at such a time (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (6/6/2013 10:58:00 AM)

    What i like in your poetry is the way you deliver your opinion, you got the own style, your way to express words for thought and it has maturity tones in your idea..that's good for you. Make you be a good writer as yourself with this personality..actually our personality is mirroring on the writing style...like i said, you have your own and its uniquely you.Keep writing_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Divya Gupta (6/6/2013 2:18:00 AM)

    Thats a fact vishal! Everybody joins n rejoice in our happiness but none come and help in our bad days..nice one (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 2, 2013


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