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Kavya ...


Priceless Gift


The soft skin, the cute breath
For me, you were the most handsome kid I ever met,
The lust to touch your mini fingers n toes
On your face was a small cheeky nose,
Your beautiful eyes that everyone would envy
In that little pricky hair you really looked funny,
Your pink cheeks and colored lips
You looked dashing in your blue bibs,
While asleep as if you were posing 'hands-up'
Watching you, not once can anyone get fed up,
The soft snore
Which I would silently adore,
Enjoying your sweet baby smell
A lullaby to sing or a short story to tell,
I enjoyed every moment with you my dear son
This was the time you were born, thanks to Almighty a ton
For blessing me with this tiny tot
As this is the most 'Priceless Gift' from God I have got!

Submitted: Friday, April 05, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 10, 2013

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just rewinding memories.....

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  • Aman Arora (4/15/2013 5:06:00 AM)

    This is a v sweet and moving poetry. I was going to tell you that a couple of places you have overdone the rhyme but it just adds to the innocence of it and I feel it stronger. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (4/7/2013 11:20:00 AM)

    Seeing the face of the new born is indeed a moment of bliss for a mother. Watching it slowly growing into a toddler is also exciting. Each child is a gift from God. The maternal instinct is embedded in every woman! A very passionate write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (4/5/2013 9:18:00 AM)

    Yes, Kavya ! When we rewind our memories we have very special ones to treasure our whole life! The happiest and most soul satisfying sweet day in one 's life is the day when one (so long a girl) becomes a mother and watches her new-born babe! Sure it is the Priceless Gift! LOVELY WRITE FROM THE CORE OF YOUR HEART! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (4/5/2013 7:56:00 AM)

    son of nectar. priceless. above all. new incarnation. I like this.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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