Presidential Stand Poem by louis rams

Presidential Stand

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the world economy has gotten out of hand
president OBAMA is the first to take a stand.
he told the republicans: i will do whatever
i have to do 'with or without you'.
we can not stand idlely by and see our nation die.
there will be controversy on what will
and what will not work. but if we do nothing
to help the economy.
'it will show we failed in our history'.

the president has problems galore
and different solutions he has in store.
he is doing what no president has done before.
by grabbing the bull by the reins
and riding it all the way.
will he fall or will he stay?

we must help him make the corral smaller
so that he does not fall to the ground.
then no solutions will be found.

our nation and all the world is watching him
and if we don't help, it's a crying sin.
what will it take for this nation to see
he's the first black president in our history.
it seems like he's fighting a losing battle
with very little support from his peers.
who are still living in fear.

the politicians think:
what if i help and it does'nt work?
i will be the political jerk. i will get so much slack
and there won't be any turning back.
but! if his plans do succeed, on his plans i can feed.
i can ride the waves to the top, and knowing that i will not flop.
the public always remembers the bad
and very rarely the good.
either way it will go into our history books.
of the stands that we took.

i would prefer to be remembered as the afterthought
briefly in their minds, rather than not at all.
because i did'nt have the gall
to stand up for something thats right
and help him to continue the fight.
so it is up to all of us, and 'in him we'll put our trust'.
no one person can do it all by themselves
and we know this very well.

for everything that he has fought
as politicians we should all give our support.
we must do whatever it takes
to help the country, before it's too late.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 08 August 2009

a very responsible write sir...a trend of marketing money or loans should be stopped to get back to true economy

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Sandra Fowler 08 August 2009

An excellent poem. President Obama has my prayers. 10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Matt Mooney 19 August 2009

Obama is poetry in motion. He fits into the dream of: ' if poets could be kings and kings poets'.Your poem is a rallying cry to get behind him in what he has put before him. A poem to make the American dream of freedom and prosperity come true.

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Christine Kerr 10 August 2009

Already we see that he has taken more action then the last number of presidents that have been in power. Wasn't it the trip to the moon where they said...'One big step for man kind' I think this is another one of those situations. Hats off to Obama and your words that explained the situation so well.

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~ Jon London ~ 09 August 2009

louis, we the people of this world have had our voice stolen by these so called goverments....and in the absence of sound...we continue to suffer by these hands of the greedy.....as we shed tears for the needy...............Great piece..gives much to think on....with questions we could never have answered by these powers...that keep the little people down in this crumbling world

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Deborah Cromer 09 August 2009

Very supportive of everyone. You have touched on all sides of the very real situation. You are truthful and honest, Well thought out and sincere. Helpful and encouraging. Your poem is positive. Your heart has eyes. You see with love. DC

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Sadly, fate has made things this way We rise and fall that is the only way Believe it or not this just marks the end Check the text... it is in there, penned. god would take care of his.. I don't worry. nice poem.

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