Preserving Good Shards Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Preserving Good Shards

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I had trouble ending a poem
in which I'd listed several negatives
in spite of which love arose.

I ended up with,
'It is because of the above
or of something beyond the above
that he inspires love.'


Before that,
as the culmination of a few failures,
I wrote, 'How can he be all the above
and still inspire love? '

and wrote this
as I thought that
was deserving of preserving.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
That poem is 'Aufidius on Coriolanus'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 27 November 2013

after reading the poet note, for which i am usually thankful, well, sometimes thankful, i did a little online research to try and get a handle on what it meant (the note) . i didn't get too far before turning back. as for this poem: very interesting, if a bit convoluted (another term i don't use and maybe shouldn't use here; but something told my fingers to type 'convoluted', you dummy!) . the following line makes me think of what one of my wives might say/have said about me. hmmm? :) bri thanks for sharing.

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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