Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,229 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Presence - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

If my presence is distracting you,
Your thoughts,
I am ready to leave.
Any way just a few more days left.
I have to go,
In search of unknown path,
As I love to travel.
Though I will keep visiting occasionally.

Every time I made my path clear
My many poems were the witness too.

I am a flow like a river
Cannot be tied
If tied it will shatter in all direction
Its presence will never be felt.
To anyone or anywhere in this world.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.


Comments about Presence by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Silver Star - 4,500 Points Uma Ram (4/29/2015 2:29:00 AM)

    The comparison with river... good mam. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,083 Points Heather Wilkins (9/13/2013 8:22:00 AM)

    we always look forward to the future. I am a flow like a river I cannot be tied. good expression/ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (9/12/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    Poetwise you are diamond. Collecting mundane sunlight and then turing it into thousands of sparkling
    lights. Each poem of yours collects your thoughts like the diamond and the words become thousands
    of sparkling thoughts. The pressence of the poem should draw our attention drawing us into the sparkling lights. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/12/2013 8:49:00 AM)

    Boldness of Jaya mind blowing /In search of unknown path, we always do this Jaya truth from the untrodden region of the mind nice sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 1, 2014


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