# Presence... Poem by Mamta Agarwal

# Presence...

Rating: 5.0


Crystal clear gaze,
Radiant skin
Luminous face.

Flowing movement
Gliding steps
.alive in the present.

Compassionate,
Measured speech
Meditative state.

Simple vestments
Love,
ONLY adornment…

Persona arrests,
Only Enlightenment
TO MANIFEST.


24.10.2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 24 October 2008

Yes, of course, I love this poem. Bcoz its innovative, the style of expression new and love expressed tremendously! sure......10+++++++++++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 October 2008

.......and its going to my fev list.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 October 2008

Resplendent depiction of loves inveterated spirit....Very fine work, indeed... Have a joyous Diwali Feast, my friend...You possess the wisdom, and the light over darkness....whenever you take pen in hand. ~ F j R ~ (((2008)))

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 October 2008

happy deevali. each line stopped me to read muse and enjoy. everyone may wish to have such one as the one narrated in it. you may consider posting your image with out which we are made blind. please read my poem image.

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Bob Blackwell 26 October 2008

I see a walking meditation, relaxed but in touch with all around, brings a bliss from present moments as they pass by. I loved this poem Mamta, your poetry is beautiful. Bob

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Sandra Fowler 24 October 2008

I like the phrase, 'alive in the present'. Love is indeed the answer to so many questions. Shine on, Mamta. With warm affection, SandraX

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 October 2008

You have redefined the saying 'simple living, high thinking.' very good work..............10

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Indira Babbellapati 24 October 2008

.........and so be it!

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