Precocious Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Precocious



When, gifted mentor, I made shift
to sift your manuscript makeshift,
which swift my spirit to uplift
you sent to me in shortest shrift,
I meant to thank you for your gift.

In your thesis there is a rift
between fact, fiction, careless clift,
a most unfortunate abyss,
thus with your aptitude I'm tiffed.

Because key arguments snow drift
it seems, Sir, that the point is miffed,
it had of course to come to this,
my servitude is spent, so shift!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(24 March 1976)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 19 July 2013

A clever and tight write, of anger and purpose. We all need to move on, who needs the agro if the relationship no longer fits.

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