Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 5,734 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Pray Do Not Pick The Daffodils (Re-Submission) - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Pray do not pick the daffodils
Their life has just begun,
Oh let them live as nature meant,
Stood dancing ‘neath the sun

Nor pluck the roses from their stems
For they will wilt and die
Oh leave them ling’ring in the earth
To grow wherein they lie

Each leaf, each bloom, each blade of grass
Belongs to mother earth
Pray do not take them from the soil
Do not destroy their birth


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is an old write which I submitted early last year. I am re-submitting due to it having disappeared from my list. I did receive comments at the time, so I don't know why it has disappeared, and PH say they have no record of it.

Comments about Pray Do Not Pick The Daffodils (Re-Submission) by Valerie Dohren

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (8/31/2013 10:23:00 PM)

    Thanks for discovering this lost gem and re-offering to us, it's simply marvelous! Every line touches the heart.10/10.
    Quite agree with the comments of Thomas A Robinson, Sandra Feldman, Lyn Paul, Lucifera Santez, Kavya, Loraine Colon and Davis Wood. (Report) Reply

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  • Mary Forrester (8/23/2013 1:39:00 PM)

    Simple but beautiful Valerie (Report) Reply

  • Juan Olivarez (8/7/2013 8:23:00 AM)

    Lovely write. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart Soulful Heart (8/4/2013 10:27:00 AM)

    nature indeed hs been taken for gra
    nted by us....pure human selfishness should b curbed by us.....good write.. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (7/30/2013 9:50:00 PM)

    I also believe, the flowers look beautiful when they stay with their mother i.e plant.Your writes are fabulous Val.You know I adore them. (Report) Reply

  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (7/30/2013 1:41:00 AM)

    Too beautiful to just disappear. (Report) Reply

  • Danny Draper (7/28/2013 6:16:00 PM)

    I remember this poem and commenting on it. The comment verbatim escapes me, but in essence it was good with a fine message and remains thus. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (7/28/2013 3:02:00 PM)

    a sign of a gentle heart...this taking care of nature in this delicate manner...i hope you must have found BONDING on my page similar to this one of yours! beautiful work! (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Feldman (7/27/2013 1:41:00 PM)

    Preserve the joy that Nature gives
    Just feast your eyes as Beauty, lives
    This is what I think you so beautifully said, gave me a deep feeling of peace and joy. A spiritual union with Nature, felt human again, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . Kavya . (7/27/2013 1:45:00 AM)

    wat a noble thought.....unfortunately not all think this way and ultimately the beautiful flowers get plucked to be decorated on their own tables (Report) Reply

  • G.R. Gaus (7/25/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    Your poems of nature are well stated and very well understood, just returned from a two week deck building adventure at my sons house to find our flower garden ravished by varmints. Pray do not eat my daffodils? ? ? ? (Report) Reply

  • Lorraine Colon (7/25/2013 1:51:00 PM)

    Enjoyed this so much. Glad you re-submitted it. It's not a poem you want to lose. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/25/2013 7:12:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem about nature and its beauty. See and enjoy. I would have missed a great one if you did not resubmit. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Kevin Halls (7/24/2013 3:19:00 PM)

    Someone may have plucked it and run off with it Val!
    Don't worry this one looks well planted and your sure to get good comments too. (Report) Reply

  • Payal Parande (7/24/2013 12:01:00 PM)

    oh! how wonderful, your poetry always flow like a peaceful breeze, just beautiful ma'am a well crafted piece (Report) Reply

  • Stephan O''Rielly (7/24/2013 9:22:00 AM)

    The dissappearing poem became a flower
    and was plucked from your collection (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (7/24/2013 9:04:00 AM)

    This is oh so beautiful Valerie. I love flowers but they are really
    beautiful when they are not picked. There is something about them
    as they flow back and forth with the wind as the sun shines brightly
    upon them. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul Lyn Paul (7/24/2013 8:37:00 AM)

    mother earths beauty is not apreciated by all unfortunately but your poem most certainly is. (Report) Reply

  • Terry M (7/24/2013 5:56:00 AM)

    Makes me want to grow some flowers for sure, well done and well put. Keep up the good work! (Report) Reply

  • Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/24/2013 5:14:00 AM)

    a beautiful thought expressed in astonishing simplicity! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013


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