Pounding At Heart's Door Poem by JoAnn McGrath

Pounding At Heart's Door

Rating: 5.0


Your pounding at heart's door
Hunting for the shore
Harboring the beat
Of the waves repeat

Your pounding at heart's door
Forever wanting more
The gist of life and love
Ambient thereof

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Yes.... this could be as a chorus for a song. t x

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Sandra Fowler 01 September 2007

A fine lyric effort. I love rhymes. They will definately survive us all no matter what the critics say. Take care, JoAnn. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 September 2007

Succinctly, oh, so swet, my dear! You do Rock, JoAnn! ~ ~ ~

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