Positiveness Smiles Poem by Suhail Kakorvi

Positiveness Smiles



I have been having people young and matured around
With feelings and motives each has a different ground
I searched among them an ideal which mind conceived
But whenever I stopped thinking in someone I achieved
Journey not ended an unknown hand pushed me forward
Previewed I and inference was just reverse from within I heard
It was simply mirage which I took as water which quenches thirst
Turned out almost all the times certainly never good but worst
Those who have no sense of how to maintain love ties
Should have not come in life, on their presence truth cries
It does not mean I renounced positiveness strong in me
Oh! Ideal thou art hidden yet soon I shall find thee

Tuesday, June 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
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Allotey Abossey 23 June 2015

Beautiful style and rhyme.....

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