Positive Way Poem by SALINI NAIR

Positive Way

Rating: 5.0


Never wish to fetch you from this side
Though your shoulder is so close all time
Here the life is so powerful
So that the hatred go from this side

I can fetch you in these depths
But wish to float in this ocean
Never wishes to be in these trenches
Always long for a peaceful shore

Never want to be gloomy on a cloudy day
But long to wet with its humble drops
Lazy giggle on a teasing face
That covers the sadness of mind inside

I can feel you in day or night
As a breeze that pass this lane
But a truth that invisible all time
Yet a pat that shiver its lane

I can feel you in this graveyard at last
At the moment of life’s closure
Darkness still I can’t love you any more
As I still wish for a new birth!

©2015 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Sunday, December 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sin
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 13 December 2015

I can feel you in this graveyard at last At the moment of life’s closure Darkness still I can’t love you any more As I still wish for a new birth! An amazing poem on positive approach.....................................10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 December 2015

Wonderful poem with enchanting rhyme and positive approach towards life. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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