Pop-Up Adverts And How They Crush Your Soul Poem by Flying Lemming

Pop-Up Adverts And How They Crush Your Soul

Rating: 2.8


I sat by my screen intending to write
An ode to the woman who gives my soul flight
Start up the computer and run through my mind
To see what emotions and feelings I find

‘Your eyes make my heart beat so fast it’ll pop’
(pop) SHOOT THE DANCING BEARS HAT AND WIN A LAPTOP!

I click the advert closed and try to regroup
My thoughts and my dreams and take another swoop

‘Your smile gives me joy other people wont know’
(pop) JOIN OUR NEW ON-LINE HYPER CASINO!

My flow interrupted again by this ad
I close it and try to get back what I had

‘Without you by me the world becomes scarier’
(pop) MEET OTHER HOT SINGLES WHO LIVE IN YOUR AREA!

A scowl, a click, I growl and flick my screen back to my ode
I try again to board my train of thought back down the road

‘Your voice gives me love, all my heart will allow’
(pop) FREE SMILIES AND POINTERS FOR YOU TO OWN NOW!

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I pick up my paper and ready my pen
To start to create my poem again

‘Your soft touch sends sparks all over my skin,
Like the sparks that fly from the computer in my bin’.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucianne Fasolo 29 May 2008

Loved this one, it was very nice. Good job, :)

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Colin J... 03 September 2007

Just downloaded Your E-Book, and read this one.. Very true, they nip your head, Emailed poemhunter, but they say that's how the site is paid for... Sad, because they are REALLY annoying... Great poem, Colin J...

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Ryan Heap 09 August 2007

ahahahaha so good VERY GOOD ENDING

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