Poo In A Box Poem by Danny Draper

Poo In A Box



Poo in a box
And mail it to a friend,
Some may be dismayed and
Some it will offend, but
Others will see fertilizer
And know the deed intends,
To nourish loving flowers
In the garden of a friend.

18/3/2014

Tuesday, March 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 24 April 2014

The title pulled me in like a tractor beam, and the rest had me hooked, (except the poo) , wonderfully imaginative stuff, I've never had the gift of life handed to me in mail, but if I do I'll know what to do. Like others have said this made me chuckle, you've already sprouted a flower. My mail box is KSH 7G3 if you ever want to talk crap.

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Elena Sandu 08 April 2014

Hahaha, love this, good point, the friend who really loves us will always know to interpret and use our intentions as good even if it looks and smells badly.

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R.benjamin Abate 06 April 2014

This made me laugh. Funny write. Very clever.

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 05 April 2014

An Australian poem which carries more than mere words. Keep writing, sport, open up another tube of Fosters and stay away from my mail box, :)

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Valerie Dohren 18 March 2014

Well this is different Danny - initially I thought it was going to be about cancer screening. Don't think I would appreciate receiving it, so please don't send me any! ! Haha.

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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