Pond Poem by Abdul Wahab

Pond

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Went to take bath
In your deep pond
and sat at the steps
We talked a lot

Emotion fell around
Like yellow foliage
We took them out
And sew into lei of memories

To celebrate our swimming
We put it on our necks
And float together in dreams

Whenever I dropped
A grain of warmth
You responded
With a ring of wave

And When I used to dive
To fetch the gems
Always Your waves of love
Touched my chest

I still feel the same inside
When there is a hot breeze
And wish with you again to float away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 07 January 2013

one of the best poems of mine, thank you..

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Heather Wilkins 09 January 2013

This is one of your best poems. I love the content and feel of it Nice metaphor and well composed. beautiful

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Heather Wilkins 09 January 2013

This is one of your best poems. I love the content and feel of it Nice metaphor and well composed. beautiful

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 January 2013

the picture of the pond is well painted here! very nice!

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Parul Rastogi 07 January 2013

wow! what a beautiful imagery!

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Wahab Abdul 07 January 2013

one of my best poems, regards

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