Polka Poem by Sameer Ahmed

Polka

Rating: 4.6


Leaving all the worries
With no hurries
Arms on eachother's back
On a Bohemian track
And one as a whole
Deep in their soul
In a shapely mist
They start to twist
Like a rhythmical dove
With their endless love
And emotions so deep
The delights constantly creep
They share a joke
And laugh with a stoke
In a duple time
And background drum hymn
Hop-step-close-step they make
Like a bustling robust crake
Enchanting they look
Linked to a single hook
In ambiance full of braw
They look beautiful when they Polka!




(1/30/2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 31 January 2009

you know Sameer, i actually saw the polka dancers. you have very vividly captured the rhythm and beat, bonohmie and camraderie- lovers having fun- lovely. you have great ability to sketch lively scenes...10 Mamta

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Absent Wryta 31 January 2009

excellently composed rhythm and rhyme piece. quite descriptive i could visualise it. nice work.10

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Rosalita Fernandez 15 March 2009

Love it! effortlessly effective!

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Reshma Ramesh 07 February 2009

beautifully written..............superb narration! !

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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2009

words dancing in rhythm...a poetic polka this...good work, Sameer...10

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Sandra Fowler 01 February 2009

The joyful dance of life. Your rhymes add music to the form. May the happiness be continued, the worries only a shadow. Take care.10 for a poet doctor. Warm regards, Sandra

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Tsira Goge 31 January 2009

Very beautiful, Sameer 10. Thank you.. Tsira

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