Polish Poem by David Harris

Polish

Rating: 5.0


Someone once wrote
a comment on a poem
that I should polish it.
Polish a poem?
What they neglected to say
was what kind of wax I should use.
Unfortunately, I am not that kind of writer.
What you see is what you get.
I write a poem only once,
and what you see is raw.
Raw energy from my pen and mind.
Therefore, if you do not like it,
I am sorry; it is the only way
I know how to write.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Aaaahh. It takes me right back to the Pen & Parchment! ! Ez

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JoAnn McGrath 04 June 2007

Amen David......there are no rules....we write from the heart with love of the art

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 June 2007

No need to polish your art my friend...10

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Lynda Robson 04 June 2007

I think your poetry is perfect David, when you 'wax' lyrical there is no need for polish, best wishes Lynda x

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Albert Wong 04 June 2007

My poems were written short and once no matter it is good or bad. Add rhymes after gotten experience, took me more than one year or time.

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David Harris

David Harris

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