Point For Struggle Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Point For Struggle



Life is full of desire
So admire
Make valid thrust
And trust

Make it live
And relive
With ideals
That should look real

Not all people may be rich
Or able to reach
But to feel poverty
Are not the blessings from almighty?

Make no poor of mind
Stay cool and kind
It may make you
Happy or upset through

Try to confine
And feel fine
The life is to lived
So the depth is also to be believed

Make no bone of contention
And ever mention
Even if you are in trouble
Make life a staging point for struggle

Thursday, August 21, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Life is full of desire So admire

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Not my style McKayla Feltenz28 minutes ago It's decent though

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

True. I understand how you feel. Ashley Emmert28 minutes ago The words you express are very real. It's like if I hadn't gone through so much pain I would not be the person I am. Struggle and pain make us stronger. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

I like the thoughts expressed karl stuber26 minutes ago These seem to me to be Words from Grandma. I do appreciate the attempt at rhyming. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2014

welcome ligbaw makaa Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2014

welcome ligbaw makaa Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2014

Victoria Marie Pecsenye very nice 22 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2014

Timileyin Gabriel Olajuwon Though not everyone can be rich - Vice versa God has endowed each with a gift Which when used can make us rich. Nice piece Hasmukh. 16 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2014

Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 3 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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