Poetry Relationships Poem by Connor Stace

Poetry Relationships

Rating: 5.0


(please read the story before reading through this)

Her

So wait Im still kind of confused
I want you like me of cause I do
Im not ashamed but i held it in for so long
trying to convince myself you’re not mine and its wrong
Listen “you’re a lovely girl” kind of sounds like a heart break to me
But hey I don’t know what you meant it to be
You are worth everything and everyone love you
And they are better so it’s cool no matter what you do
I’m normally stable but it’s the strong things that make my stability shake
And from your previous writing I’m not sure what to make.
I never liked the other guys and wait you started to like me
Did your likes turn into nothing or what happened please tell me
Today I loved having to pretend to be yours as I wanted it to be true
And as you held my hands and i wanted you to be mine to
That’s probably why i couldn’t stop giggling stupidly like I do
But hey that normally what happens when I talk to you
I like you lots and you are my light
I expect a rebuttal a talk Monday.. Peace Love and Good night

Him

Sorry this is going to be quick
I’m tired so I’ll need some sleep
Rebuttal time here we go hope you find this neat,
Your awesome you can build computers that elite
And everything about you from top to bottom is sweet
Don’t worry I hold stuff in to mine was for nearly 3 months long
Then I found an escape through writing a song
You don’t know what I meant or what my last rebuttal means?
Its saying you’re something to me
Your saying that the “strong” things make you fall over and shake?
Well I’m here to help you to the light away from the earthquake
You can do this it’s never too late
C’mon you never like Big T and bigger T
Every girl likes them,
There who I looked up to and want to be,
I mean look at them everything about them surpasses me
You want to know the truth yeah I did start to like you a little
From near the final bend when the rehearsals for the musical
Was coming to an end
but then I overheard a friend
They said that you look like someone
Someone who hurt me with no intention to apologize nor amend.
That’s why I was confused, until now
I know my feelings are sound
And I like you for you
There something in you I found,
A happiness I can see you have in there
Open it up to the air
And spread it to the world
That I dare,
You’re a beautiful girl
And all I want you to know is that I really do care
Goodnight, tomorrow ill hug you tight like a bear

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Me and this beautiful girl had sent each other poetry and i decided to record some of our work we did, pretty cute stuff.

In the previous poem i told her i liked her, that she was a lovely girl, And we did a film school music video and we had to pretend we were in love 'pretend to be yours' (all reference to her verse)

in mine i held stuff in for three months long is a reference to my previous songs about a girl that well had an effect on me, Big T and bigger T are 2 boys that were muscly, all the girls liked them, unlike me i was just a skinny white boy, and when i say that a friend said she looked like someone i also refer to the girl from the past. (all reference to my verse)

this girl is amazing 'suicidal happiness'
she has had hardship but i love her (big words)
but true

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ash-lee Massacre 24 July 2013

A girl meets a boy She starts to like him She questions herself Thinking that loving him would be a sin She tells him about her feelings, not expecting anything How could he love her and everything she is He said that he liked her to And the thing is this Now she loves him More then she will ever be able to explain Shes tried not to love him so much But the feeling couldnt be tamed She wanted to believe Every kiss that makes her mind a blur Everything that he says but its hard But maybe, just maybe she relises that you might love her xo

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