Poetry Pain Poem by ramesh rai

Poetry Pain

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Poetry pain is more severe
than any pain given by the world
like the labor pain giving birth
to a child, poetry sprouts from heart
in both the cases, pain or pleasure
it becomes the pleasure of a mother
giving birth despite of her forbearance.

A poet assumes his emotion
seeing a blooming or a withering flower
to engross in his bossom

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 June 2014

critically analyzed poem

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Akhtar Jawad 19 June 2014

A lovely nice poem, but the pain of creation is not so irritating as that of destruction.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 June 2014

poetry sprouts from heart Great words delivered through the beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 June 2014

Birth of a poem is like birth of a child. There is that pain. Nicely expressed.

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Amitava Sur 25 June 2014

Very truly said, poetry comes out from the heart only, thanks for sharing your ideas.

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Md Asadullah 22 June 2014

I can relate to this one, but once the poem is complete it gives us immense pleasure..thanks for your comment on My poem A Muslim's Prayer

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014

A lovely poem with fantastic flow of words. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Neela Nath Das 21 June 2014

So beautiful expression! Thanks for sharing.

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