Poetry In Coffin Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Poetry In Coffin

Rating: 5.0


Let me make a punch
Of flower and heart
A petal's charm dumped
By the wasp’s lust

So many things happen so many ways
Forgot to spur the treasures
To spread in the air, petal’s fate
Let me take a chance
Let me bring a live verse.


10/11/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shymal Chakraborty 20 December 2008

outstanding....khub bhalo laglo....shyamal

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Kesav Easwaran 12 November 2008

imaginative mind has the ability to create anything live from possible dead ends...as in the case of Mousumi's this write...the last line is challenging and hence appreciably refreshing...10

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Min Sia 10 November 2008

Simplicity..but defines clearly! ! Nice choice of words. A real poetry in coffin...

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Joseph Poewhit 10 November 2008

You haven't swam a stroke, till you jump into the pool

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