Poetry Ii. Poem by Ballerina With Fins

Poetry Ii.



Words
taking a trip
on a lazy sunday afternoon
walking down the hot country lanes
through the dense forest
over the shimmering lake
under the dense sunlight
on a pompous red carpet
across the bustling city
beside the red roses
beneath the dreaming tree-shadows
through the strawberry fields

into the light.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 12 May 2006

I love playing with combinations of prepositional phrases. Good poem. Nice Read.

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Goldy Locks 08 May 2006

nicely written! & i like your pen-name Best care, Sus.

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