Loi O'Brien

Poetry - Poem by Loi O'Brien

Have you written poetry before?
I have and do.
Though terrible at it, I find it a release
from suppressed frustration that I have in the many failures of men.
I secretly hate them you know. I know.
The idea of emasculating them through the sharing of a written thought makes my own dimples pop!
It is art after all and who doesn't enjoy a good rhyme?

Comments about Poetry by Loi O'Brien

  • Rookie - 30 Points Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi (2/24/2014 11:56:00 PM)

    Good one indeed!
    But sir, rhymes usually restrict my creative expressions. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Dean Bottomley (2/24/2014 3:46:00 PM)

    Oh I so agree. My simple ditties are the release of some very strong feelings that could cause damage if they remain inside my head. Thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 25, 2014

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