Poetical Basic Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Poetical Basic

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Ideas may have direct relation
They are strengthened with relaxation
Not by physical bond or attachment
It has its own movement

Somewhere it is inspiration
Some where it is elevation
Some where it is indication
But it is after all imagination

Any object may appeal
But it has to speak real
It may be nature of talk
That may make person miles to walk

Legend says” source is divine”
It may be felt from ruin
Garden may offer nice scene
But alas! The picture must be picked by pen

Great many poets are born
In past and in present to turn
The historical concept of love and bond
It appears always divine and not placed as second

I will place any source
As unique and driving one
If that results into beautiful epic
After all that is the poetical basic

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Criticism from a real Creative Writing Class Sebrina10 hours ago It was good writing, but confused some. I like the flow. Good word use.

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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