naida supnet

Rookie - 276 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

Poem For The Day - Poem by naida supnet

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Recited each verse as fine as I could
As the silence of the morning unfolded
Mentioned every line, delivered every word
That is my poem for the day, so, have you heared?
The dewdrops went, the sunlight kissed
The cold breeze gone, the warm sun came
Still my love I expressed, delivered word by word
That is my poem for the day, have you listened?
Twilight came, darkness embracing
The stars parading before us smiling
Still my verses, unendingly I sing
That is my poem for the day, have you been smiling?


Comments about Poem For The Day by naida supnet

  • Gold Star - 7,606 Points Bri Edwards (8/3/2013 10:57:00 PM)

    hey naida, i'm on a quest, trying to find a poem which has no comment yet, working from the end of the list.
    this has not been very successful. so i quickly took a look at this one and the only thing that jumped out at me,
    that i feel like mentioning, is a misspelling. but it is easy to imagine someone misspelling heard as heared. bri :)
    p.s. and if i wrote the last line i would be tempted to type you as YOU to emphasize that word and to take the emphasis away from smiling, which also ended a nearby preceding line (i misspelled preceding as preceeding but the computer caught me!) . (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Aqeb Benazir (8/14/2011 5:42:00 AM)

    absolutely brilliant: D such a refreshing poem and very sublime! ! great work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jim Troy (8/10/2011 6:51:00 AM)

    This one is very special.... And I really like its rthym Lots of that old fashioned beauty............ Jim Troy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie LoveLifeLen A. (7/11/2011 2:22:00 PM)

    Wow! what a poem for the day!
    It's wonderful! I love it... :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, July 11, 2011


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