Poem Baked In An Oven! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Poem Baked In An Oven!



Who though not, likes and appreciation
And a pat on back for the wonderful creation
Whatever the creation may be
May be a tiny one
Or the mightier ones
It's value increases especially
When comes from a heartfelt suggestion
It motivates one to come up with more poems
Some poems goes free from any likes or dislikes.
Even some dislikes shows to correct our mistakes
Like or dislikes shows number of visitor on your pages
It's something to be noted upon.

These likes keeps my fuel burning
A burning to keep my words spinning
My head reeling
Till a poem is baked in oven
Finally after steaming in an oven
For an hour or two.
A final toppling
Sugar coatings
Hot and Sizzling layer of brownie
With enchanting fragrance
Cools ones eyes and heart melting and mouth watering,
As you go on relishing bit by bit...

When it enters party
It's toppling cover as mask to many faces.
Each sizzling drops that drips from mouth
Bit by bit enjoy each relishing words
Don't stop till the last words of poem is relished by you.
Don't forget to give a kiss to your loved one
With sizzling brownie dripping from your lips.

Let us enjoy the poem baked in an oven
Especially for you my loved ones!

Please do write some comments about my poem
Baked in my oven of my heart!
Smile....enjoy the sizzling cake!

Though I don't know ABCD of cake
Oven I never used
Still I feel my words can bake a poem in oven.
Even if poem is bitter one
Do comment for its improvisation.
Thank you my dear for sharing my cake
though not a good one but not a burnt one either!
Thank You!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014

Sunday, July 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 06 July 2014

This is such a sweet and delicious poem you baked on your oven.I loved it!

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Akhtar Jawad 06 July 2014

A poet is born not made. One who feels, thinks in a beautiful manner and converts his thoughts in appealing words is a poet, I have no doubt about it that Geetha is not a poet, she is a born poetess.

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A succulent piece........Geetha........made me bite it twice...................really beautiful presented with sweet words...............

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V P Mahur 06 July 2014

Dear poet, Yours is a concept in a new flavour. Thanks for your comments.

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Salini Nair 07 July 2014

this is really a baked cake of words that have new flavor......

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Ken E Hall 15 July 2014

What a fun poem indeed I would say it is a pizza of good writing baked to a lip smacking beauty, makes me feel life is just a bowl of cherries! ...regards

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 08 July 2014

Good morning my time here in USA. I have never heard anyone describe the writing and musing of poetry in such a way. Well done. Loyd

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best of emotional feelings and correct sayings in its clarity of mind regarding the poems of the poet and its creation wonderfully it is also made into a poem. I feel it beautiful and nice to recite. May very good poems writing capability blesses come from the heights we all respects.

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Neela Nath Das 07 July 2014

I love your every thought Geetha.Adorable!

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Valsa George 07 July 2014

We relish every slice of poem thoughtfully baked in the oven of your imagination Geetha! Keep baking more and more!

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