Poem #13 Poem by Angel E. Broberg

Poem #13

Rating: 2.5


Alone I can't mend my broken heart
Without hope, how can I even start?
When all I have is this dark and gray
A lingering shadow in my way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Seale 14 June 2013

But you're not alone... and the shadows are just a distraction, zig-zag between dispair and hope... within your words, are the passages of hope. Poem #13 is a raw and naked look at your emotions and your broken heart... but between the lines is what I see... words that heal, passages that reach out to that desperation within us that strive for us never to give up hope. Very heartfelt Write Angel.; -) Kelly.

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Ramesh Rai 29 July 2013

please do read my poem darkness is not for ever

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Ramesh Rai 29 July 2013

keep writin. beautiful write

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Angel E. B. 16 June 2013

Yes Olumide, I have heard.: P But sometimes the soul must express it's deepest sadness and let out it's most depressing words. Lol. Because we are poets, we must. Don't worry too much about me, I bounce back to normalcy sooner or later.

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Gold Trybes 16 June 2013

Have you heard about taking it one day at a time? Have u heard that darkness never outlasts light? Have u heard that u are only a mirror of what u see?

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Angel E. B. 15 June 2013

Thank you Kelly, I am grateful for your words^^

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