Treasure Island

Angel E. Broberg


Poem #13


Alone I can't mend my broken heart
Without hope, how can I even start?
When all I have is this dark and gray
A lingering shadow in my way

Submitted: Friday, June 14, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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  • Angel E. B. (6/16/2013 6:07:00 PM)

    Yes Olumide, I have heard.: P
    But sometimes the soul must express it's deepest sadness and let out it's most depressing words. Lol. Because we are poets, we must. Don't worry too much about me, I bounce back to normalcy sooner or later. (Report) Reply

  • Olumide Familusi (6/16/2013 5:15:00 PM)

    Have you heard about taking it one day at a time? Have u heard that darkness never outlasts light? Have u heard that u are only a mirror of what u see? (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (6/14/2013 8:17:00 PM)

    But you're not alone... and the shadows are just a distraction, zig-zag between dispair and hope...
    within your words, are the passages of hope. Poem #13 is a raw and naked look at your emotions and your broken heart... but between the lines is what I see... words that heal, passages that reach out to that desperation within us that strive for us never to give up hope. Very heartfelt Write Angel.; -) Kelly. (Report) Reply

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