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Mercedes Miller
(12/11/2008 10:49:00 AM) |
I loved the poem it was well written good job
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Ana Dasilva
(12/8/2008 10:39:00 PM) |
great poem...well written
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Missy Melita
(11/8/2008 9:39:00 AM) |
actually i thought it was great, the way you rhymed it too. thanks for sharing with me. you did a good job! =)
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Maria Janeth Tumbaga
(11/7/2008 2:58:00 PM) |
well hope that i can be dominant in a relationship like you do
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Aijaz Asif
(11/7/2008 12:27:00 PM) |
a beautiful write on dream...which i do most lol....
'wakeup asif wakeup
it's morning again'.....you did wrote very well with so much smoothness in it..i liked it, thanks for sharing
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Cleo Fletcher
(11/7/2008 11:44:00 AM) |
Very well written. the imagery is very easy to grasp.
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Mifael Llauderes
(11/7/2008 11:10:00 AM) |
it's two becoming one... in a dream (fleeting)
a good write, flowing with easy rhyming words...
easy to grasp.
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