Please Solve Poem by Liliana EL.

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Thought I'd be done with moving on
But moving on just doesn't work that way

Can't be crushing on someone so hard
and just discard your feelings the next day

Not so easy to just say no
This I believe I knew

Just to forget is not an option
When you're still very good friends

Won't walk away
Not turning corners and backing down
Both here to stay


How to stay composed
While cracking under pressure

How to feel alright
When so much feels so off


Thought I had overcome this issue of mine
Thought that I was alright

Thought I could just shut down my feelings
Tranfer them to another being

Is now the time to admit that I'm wrong
Or can I keep up my act
convincing myself that I'm alright, going strong
In tact, not torn and smashed and shattered across the ground

I thought that I had finished moving on
Seems my feelings have faded
Are no longer so strong

But I'm not fooling myself
My whole being, my presence, has been dulled
I've gone down and under
I've sunken
I've been lost in this great haze
where I can't find definitive direction

I've got to pull myself out
Fly high and soar and glide


I've got to figure out why I keep visiting an abyss
The depth and darkness overwhelming
I need answers
Help me
Guide me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 December 2013

Ah aw i see. But first lets assess it as a poem. I say it is a splendid poem with a superb rhyme scheme. Now contentwise U r right it isnt easy as pie to jus move on and transfer feelings. Great job!

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