Please Don'T Stop Loving Me When I'M Old Poem by Almedia Knight-Oliver

Please Don'T Stop Loving Me When I'M Old

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Our love rose in the fall of golden leaves, when
rough winter roots for gentle plants in spring.
We were planted in earth and grew and blossomed
When I pass, place a rose petal on my grave

Sweet love is born out of two souls
winds whistles; stars and moon twinkles
In obedient to my heart, I entrust me to you
Now, let’s continue down lover’s lane,
Alongside grass holding holding hands
Baby shrubs asleep on mother earth's lap
Straining ears to hear bird
Singing songs of praise and
bringing to mind the good old days.

When the clouds no longer hold rain
will you shower me with your love
When my head is covered with snow
will you forever be my beau
When my eyes cease to be my panes
Will you let arms my cane
Please don’t stop loving me because I’m old.

Thursday, February 26, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I know how you felt when you wrote this loving and beautiful poem. Some women are thrown out when they grow older and replaced with a younger model. When we are soul mates, we work together and 'do' life together. Your last stanza said it all. The poem captured my heart. 10 Karin Anderson

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Saadat Tahir 01 May 2009

Hi ALM speaking like an old ELM tree there beautiful similitude... awe some write may be you should read my 'a place called home|' cheers

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