Hold my hand,
Please, hold it,
I feel lonely, very lonely,
I want a friend hand, confident,
So that I can go ahead.
Hold me!
Hug me!
Sometimes I feel myself falling down,
Twisting with my solitude,
I shout, nobody answers,
Only the nigth, with its silence
And its darkness
Just a star shining,
As wanting to show,
The way to tread.
I walk lonely, as in the past,
Sobbing as always.
I feel cold in my soul,
Just a tear calm me down.
Lonely, very lonely! ...
My heart complains
Please! Listen to my scream!
Hold my hand,
Please, hold it! ...
UMBELINA FROTA
Tradução – Nelson Francisco de Andrade
' i wanna hold your hands..........i wanna hold your hands ' there goes the famous song from the Beetles.Hopin someones would be with you soon to kill your loneliness.Nice works Bastos.
awwwwwwww. that's so cool. thats how i write when i want a great friend to be there for me when i need a hand to hold. :) nice poem! ! ! brittany
A kind request is done to hold hand in tender love twisting solitude. Sometimes you feel that you fall down but in love you feel that you are not lonely and you have got companion and friend has caught your hand. This is an excellent poem.10
.......................poignant and beautifully written by a mature mind. Cheers, Jerry
your heartprint, touching love poem, thanks for sharing
My heart complains Please! Listen to my scream! great lines... people will hear just wait and see.good job. Crystal
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lighting a candle to brighten your world...lovely but so heartfelt...thank you