Planted Dreams Poem by Ursula Tillmann

Planted Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Wilted the blossom
of planted dreams
out there on my
field of memories.

Time could not
force itself to
deposit
duration.

Pining away
with that
last breath
toward the bud.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

As simple as wonderful an imagery, indeed! Well done!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 April 2008

yet the memory still persists by the blossoms when mingling in the breeze by the time and space as the last breath seems to preen to the bud by the green as the simple ripples in remniscence...............superb expression by the imagery when lucid, and of unique genere as the beauty when spendoured in the those sands of time, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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