Pity Poem by Sandra Feldman

Pity

Rating: 4.3


Sometimes,
You feel so alone,
Misunderstood,
Thrown in a corner,
No can, no could,
No love, no would,
Alone,
Who should,
Go on?

Pity,
Those loveless ones,
All Alone,
In moonless ponds.
Waiting for the sun.

Sunday, May 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 19 May 2014

Beautifully expressed Sandra. Loneliness can hit us all x

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Darlene Walsh 19 May 2014

Lonely is a very sad place to be, I have been there and in the sun is a much nice place.

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Eugene Levich 17 May 2014

Ay! Sandrita, This one makes me feel so sad! Write one happy poem for me- your 500th! Rico

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Mazhari David 15 May 2014

I always feel very awkward when trying to comment a poem. Words upon words... some do it with a real talent though. All I can say is that I have felt this poem deep inside.* *

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