Pink Ribbons Poem by Valerie Dohren

Pink Ribbons

Rating: 4.8


Pink ribbons span the evening sky
And trim your feathered bed
Now I will sing a lullaby
Lay down your sleepy head

You are the universal child
You, the child of the world
Born as to be yet sweet and mild
With hair that`s softly curled

The world has seen another day
The earth has turned again
The birds have watched you laugh and play
Betwixt the sun and rain

You are the universal child
You, the child of the world
By Mother Nature you are styled
In whom the rest are furled

The world has passed yet slowly by
This earth so turned in vain
For, sorrowing, it saw you cry
And felt your silent pain

You are the universal child
You, the child of the world
I pray you'll never be defiled
Nor fear at you be hurled

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 19 May 2012

Just beautiful Val, I was singing that lullaby as I read it, really enjoyable.

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Captain Cur 20 May 2012

That one was great Val. I liked the metaphor of the Universal Child. Oh no! Pirate girl was so touched she is dyeing all my sails pink. How will I ever live it down!

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Indira Babbellapati 21 May 2012

this wonderful poem began with a great visual!

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Tulip Julio Tulipan 21 May 2012

Oh, fantastic! I like this poem and it is so nice and beautiful!

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Kevin Halls 21 May 2012

Beautiful imagery and words, another masterpiece from a brilliant poet.

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Meena Mustafa 03 July 2012

Val you are a great writer and I love reading your poems. Beautiful poem indeed :)

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William F Dougherty 24 June 2012

That is: 2d, fourth, sixth stanzas.

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William F Dougherty 24 June 2012

Good work. Try to add more distinction between first two lines so they do not seem to repeat the thought. cheers, WFD

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Karen Sinclair 18 June 2012

beautiful... just absolutely lovely... tyvm karen

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The Poet Darkling 15 June 2012

Simply elegant...you have a good feel for flow and poetry suits you...keep writing, I'll shall keep reading...

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